In many countries, especially tourism-driven ones, there has been a long-lasting rise in the number of accidents involving rental cars. While some people are of the opinion that imposing regulations to check renters’ driving records should be the solution, others think there are more effective alternatives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Step 1
IELTS ፈታኝ ምክሮች ለዚህ ርዕስ
To ensure a balanced discussion, dedicate one full body paragraph to each of the two views presented in the question. For instance, your first body paragraph should thoroughly explore the arguments for checking renters' driving records, while the second should delve into various effective alternatives. Avoid being overly one-sided by giving equal weight to the development of both perspectives before presenting your personal opinion in the conclusion.
When discussing solutions, consider specific arguments and examples. For the 'driving records' view, you could argue that access to national driving databases (like the US DMV or a potential EU-wide system) could flag high-risk individuals, reducing insurance liabilities and enhancing public safety. For 'alternatives,' consider mandatory local driving orientation courses for tourists (similar to New Zealand's 'Road Code' information for visitors) or improved road signage and infrastructure in popular, accident-prone tourist areas, as seen in some parts of Iceland.
The most common mistake students make on this question is providing only superficial or generic alternatives, or simply reiterating why accidents happen rather than proposing concrete solutions. To avoid this, brainstorm a diverse range of 'more effective alternatives' beyond just driver behavior, such as vehicle safety standards, road design improvements, or even targeted public awareness campaigns. Ensure these alternatives are clearly articulated as *solutions* to the problem.
For this discussion essay, employ clear linking and transition phrases to guide the reader through your arguments. Begin your first body paragraph with a phrase like, "One school of thought posits that stringent regulations requiring checks on renters' driving records offer the most viable solution." Then, transition to the opposing view with phrases such as, "Conversely, others contend that a more holistic approach, encompassing a range of alternatives, would yield greater efficacy." This signposting ensures logical flow.
Examiners look for a nuanced and well-supported discussion in a band 8-9 answer to this question. This means not just listing points, but developing them with logical reasoning, specific examples, and sophisticated vocabulary related to policy, tourism, and road safety. A high-scoring essay will also present a clear, well-justified personal opinion that synthesizes the arguments presented, demonstrating critical thinking and a comprehensive understanding of the issue.
Step 2
የሚመከር የድርሰት አወቃቀር (Band 7+ ደረጃ)
1መግቢያ
ሁለቱን ወገኖች ፍትሃዊ በሆነ መንገድ አቅርቦ አቋምህን አሳይ።
- ሁለቱንም አመለካከቶች መረዳትህን አሳይ — ይህ ወሳኝ አስተሳሰብህን ያሳያል
- ወደ የት እንደምትደግፍ ግለጽ — ሁለቱን እኩል ብትዳስስም
- academic ቃና ጠብቅ — ስሜታዊ ቋንቋ ወይም አድልዎ ያስወግዱ
Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች
There are differing opinions on whether...While some people believe that..., others argue that...This essay will examine both perspectives before reaching a conclusion.2አካል አንቀጽ 1 — የመጀመሪያ አመለካከት
አንድ ወገን በአክብሮት እና በአሳማኝ መንገድ አቅርብ።
- ባትስማማም፣ ይህን አመለካከት በእውነተኛ ምሳሌ ቀጥተኛ አቅርብ
- academic የሪፖርት ቋንቋ ተጠቀም፡ 'Research indicates...', 'Studies show...', 'Experts argue...'
- ጠንካራ ነጥቦቹን አምን — ይህ ሚዛናዊ ትንተናህን ያሳያል እና ነጥብ ያስገኛል
Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች
On the one hand, supporters of this view argue that...Those in favour point out that...A key argument for this position is...3አካል አንቀጽ 2 — ተቃራኒ አመለካከት
የተቃራኒውን አስተያየት በተመሳሳይ ጥልቀትና ብቃት አቅርብ።
- የአንደኛውን አንቀጽ መዋቅርና ጥልቀት አዛምድ — መርማሪዎች ሁለቱን ያነጻጽራሉ
- እንደ 'Conversely'፣ 'In contrast'፣ 'On the other hand' ያሉ ተቃራኒ ማስተሳሰሪያ ቃላት ተጠቀም
- አስተያየት ካለህ ይህን አንቀጽ ትንሽ አጠናክር — ነገር ግን ፍትሃዊ ሁን
Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች
On the other hand, critics contend that...However, there is a strong counter-argument...Conversely, many people feel that...4ማጠቃለያ
ሁለቱን ሃሳቦች አጣምር፤ ወሳኝ ፍርድህን ግልጽ አድርግ።
- የሁለቱን ወገን ትክክለኛነት አምን — ይህ የአዕምሮ ብስለትህን ያሳያል
- ምርጫህን በግልጽና በእምነት ግለጽ — አትወዛወዝ
- ግልጽ አቋም ያዝ — መርማሪዎች ግልጽነትን ይሸልማሉ
Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች
In conclusion, while both sides have merit, I believe that...Having considered both arguments, it seems that...Step 3
ከፍተኛ ውጤት የሚያስገኙ ቃላት እና ሐረጎች
Step 4
Academic Phrases for This Essay Type
It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignoreጭማሬ
MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is moreቅራኔ
HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConverselyምክንያት / ውጤት
ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads toምሳሌ
For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch asስምምነት ወዳለ አቅጣጫ
AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedlyStep 5
Grammar Patterns for Band 7+
የስምምነት ዓረፍተ ነገር
Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.
ከፍተኛ ሰዋሰዋዊ ቁጥጥር ያሳያል። 'Although' ብለህ ጀምር — ተቃራኒ ሃሳብ አምጣ፣ ከዚያ አቋምህን ግለጽ — ጥልቅ አስተሳሰብ ያሳያል።
ሁኔታዊ ዓረፍተ ነገር (Type 2)
If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.
ለምናባዊ ሁኔታዎችና መፍትሔዎች ጥሩ ነው። 'If + past simple, would + infinitive' — ተለዋዋጭነት ያሳያል።
ለacademic ቃና Passive ተጠቀም
It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.
Academic writing passive ዓረፍተ ነገሮችን ይመርጣል። 'It is + past participle + that' — ስልጣናዊና ገለልተኛ ቃና ይሰጣል።
አንጻራዊ ዓረፍተ ነገር
Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.
ውስብስብ ሳይሆን ብቃትን ያሳያል። ለሰዎች 'who'፣ ለነገሮች 'which'፣ ለሁለቱም 'that' ተጠቀም።
ጥቅጥቅ ለማለት የስም ሐረግ
The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.
በጥቂት ቃላት ብዙ መረጃ ያስተላልፋል። 'The implementation of effective policies' እና 'policies are implemented effectively' ይወዳደሩ — Lexical Resource ውጤትን ያሻሽላል።
Step 6
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