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Discussionacademic·2021

Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers. Others believe that it results in the loss of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Andika angalau maneno 250. Unapaswa kutumia takriban dakika 40 katika kazi hii.

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Step 1

Vidokezo vya Mtahini kwa Mada Hii

1

For this discussion essay, dedicate one full body paragraph to each of the two opposing views presented in the prompt. This ensures you fully address both sides before offering your personal opinion in the conclusion, preventing a one-sided argument which can penalise your Task Response score.

2

When discussing technology improving lives, consider examples like automation of hazardous tasks in manufacturing, leading to safer workplaces, or the rise of remote work platforms enhancing flexibility for employees globally. For job loss, you could cite the impact of self-checkout kiosks on retail cashiers or AI replacing routine administrative tasks, leading to significant labour market displacement in certain sectors.

3

The most common mistake is discussing technology broadly without consistently linking its effects back to "the lives of workers" or "loss of jobs." To avoid this, ensure every argument and example explicitly explains how technology either enhances worker well-being, creates new roles, or conversely, renders existing jobs redundant.

4

Employ clear transition phrases to guide the reader through your discussion. Start your first body paragraph with a phrase like "One perspective posits that..." and introduce the opposing view in your second body paragraph with "Conversely, an alternative viewpoint contends that..." or "However, a contrasting argument highlights...".

5

For a band 8-9, examiners look for a nuanced discussion that acknowledges the complexity of the issue, avoiding oversimplification. This means demonstrating a sophisticated understanding of both the benefits (e.g., enhanced productivity, new skill demands) and drawbacks (e.g., structural unemployment, need for reskilling initiatives) of technological advancement on the workforce, supported by precise vocabulary and complex grammatical structures.

Step 2

Muundo wa Aya Unaopendekezwa

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Utangulizi

Tambulisha pande zote mbili za mjadala na utaje ni ipi utakayoizungumzia.

  • Monyeshe mtahini kuwa unaelewa mitazamo YOTE MIWILI.
  • Kwa hiari, taja upande unaounga mkono.
  • Dumisha mtazamo usioegemea upande wowote na wenye uwiano.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

There are differing opinions on whether...While some people believe that..., others argue that...This essay will examine both perspectives before reaching a conclusion.
2
Aya ya Mwili 1 — Mtazamo wa Kwanza

Wasilisha upande mmoja wa hoja kwa usawa, ukiwa na ushahidi.

  • Hata kama hukubaliani, wasilisha mtazamo huu kwa heshima na kwa mfano halisi.
  • Tumia lugha ya kuripoti: 'Some argue...', 'Proponents suggest...'
  • Malizia kwa kutambua nguvu ya mtazamo huu.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

On the one hand, supporters of this view argue that...Those in favour point out that...A key argument for this position is...
3
Kifungu cha Mwili 2 — Mtazamo Tofauti

Wasilisha upande mwingine kwa kina na ushahidi sawa.

  • Linganisha muundo wa aya ya 1 kwa usawa.
  • Tumia maneno ya kuunganisha yenye utofauti ili kuashiria mabadiliko.
  • Ikiwa una maoni, aya hii inaweza kuwa na nguvu zaidi kidogo.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

On the other hand, critics contend that...However, there is a strong counter-argument...Conversely, many people feel that...
4
Hitimisho

Fupisha maoni yote mawili na utoe maoni yako mwenyewe (ikiwa utaulizwa).

  • Kubali uhalali wa pande zote mbili
  • Taja upendeleo wako waziwazi ikiwa swali linauliza 'give your opinion'
  • Usikae katikati kila wakati — chukua msimamo.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

In conclusion, while both sides have merit, I believe that...Having considered both arguments, it seems that...

Step 3

Msamiati Muhimu

automationThe use of technology to perform tasks with minimal human intervention.
upskillingThe process of learning new skills to remain competitive in the workforce, especially in response to technological changes.
labour market displacementThe situation where workers lose their jobs due to technological advancements or economic shifts.
it is widely acknowledged thatA phrase used to introduce a generally accepted fact or belief.
a compelling argument can be madeA phrase used to introduce a strong and persuasive point.
this notion is predicated onA phrase used to explain that an idea or belief is based on a particular assumption or principle.
from my perspectiveA phrase used to introduce one's personal opinion or viewpoint.
the evidence overwhelmingly suggestsA phrase used to indicate that there is a large amount of data or information supporting a particular conclusion.
notwithstandingDespite; in spite of.
it could be argued thatA phrase used to introduce a possible interpretation or contention, often to present a nuanced view.

Step 4

Academic Phrases for This Essay Type

It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignore

Kujumlisha

MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is more

Tofauti

HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConversely

Sababu / Athari

ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads to

Mfano

For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch as

Ruzuku

AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedly

Step 5

Grammar Patterns for Band 7+

Sentensi changamano yenye konsesheni

Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.

Inamwonyesha mtahini kuwa unaweza kushughulikia sentensi tegemezi. Anza na 'Although/While' + mtazamo tofauti, kisha toa mtazamo wako.

Masharti (Aina ya 2)

If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.

Inafaa kwa hoja na suluhisho za kinadharia. 'If + past simple, would + infinitive'.

Sauti ya utendaji kwa ajili ya sauti ya kitaaluma

It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.

Uandishi wa kitaaluma unapendelea matumizi ya sauti ya upatanishi. 'It is + past participle + that' inasikika kuwa na mamlaka.

Kifungu cha uhusiano

Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.

Vifungu vya uhusiano huongeza maelezo bila kuanza sentensi mpya. Tumia 'who' kwa watu, 'which' kwa vitu.

Kifungu cha nomino kwa msongamano

The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.

Weka taarifa katika virai nomino badala ya kutumia sentensi nyingi fupi. Hii itakusaidia kupata alama za juu katika Lexical Resource.

Step 6

Jibu la Mfano

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