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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Step 1

IELTS ፈታኝ ምክሮች ለዚህ ርዕስ

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Ensure your essay dedicates a distinct body paragraph to each of the two opposing views presented in the prompt: one for studying whatever students like, and another for focusing on future-useful subjects. Avoid merging these discussions or giving disproportionate attention to one side, as this can lead to an unbalanced discussion and lower your Task Response score. Your personal opinion should be clearly stated and supported in the conclusion.

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To strengthen your arguments, consider specific examples like how a liberal arts education (studying what one likes) in the US is often credited with fostering well-rounded critical thinkers, or conversely, how countries like South Korea prioritize STEM fields to drive technological advancement and economic competitiveness. Mentioning the global demand for skills in areas like AI or renewable energy can support the 'useful subjects' view.

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A common pitfall is to interpret 'useful in the future' too narrowly, focusing exclusively on STEM without acknowledging other vital fields like healthcare, education, or even certain humanities that foster essential soft skills. To avoid this, ensure your discussion of 'useful subjects' encompasses a broader range of disciplines that contribute to societal well-being and economic stability beyond just science and technology.

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For a clear and coherent structure, use transition phrases that explicitly signal the shift between discussing the first view and the second. For instance, after elaborating on the 'study what they like' view, you could begin the next paragraph with 'Conversely, a strong argument can be made for prioritizing subjects deemed useful for future societal needs.' This ensures a smooth flow and helps the examiner follow your discussion.

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Examiners look for a nuanced discussion that acknowledges the inherent tension between personal fulfillment and societal needs, rather than presenting a simplistic either/or argument. A band 8-9 essay will demonstrate a sophisticated understanding of how both approaches contribute to a well-rounded society and economy, perhaps suggesting a balanced approach or the importance of transferable skills, while maintaining a clear, well-supported opinion.

Step 2

የሚመከር የድርሰት አወቃቀር (Band 7+ ደረጃ)

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መግቢያ

ሁለቱን ወገኖች ፍትሃዊ በሆነ መንገድ አቅርቦ አቋምህን አሳይ።

  • ሁለቱንም አመለካከቶች መረዳትህን አሳይ — ይህ ወሳኝ አስተሳሰብህን ያሳያል
  • ወደ የት እንደምትደግፍ ግለጽ — ሁለቱን እኩል ብትዳስስም
  • academic ቃና ጠብቅ — ስሜታዊ ቋንቋ ወይም አድልዎ ያስወግዱ

Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች

There are differing opinions on whether...While some people believe that..., others argue that...This essay will examine both perspectives before reaching a conclusion.
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አካል አንቀጽ 1 — የመጀመሪያ አመለካከት

አንድ ወገን በአክብሮት እና በአሳማኝ መንገድ አቅርብ።

  • ባትስማማም፣ ይህን አመለካከት በእውነተኛ ምሳሌ ቀጥተኛ አቅርብ
  • academic የሪፖርት ቋንቋ ተጠቀም፡ 'Research indicates...', 'Studies show...', 'Experts argue...'
  • ጠንካራ ነጥቦቹን አምን — ይህ ሚዛናዊ ትንተናህን ያሳያል እና ነጥብ ያስገኛል

Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች

On the one hand, supporters of this view argue that...Those in favour point out that...A key argument for this position is...
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አካል አንቀጽ 2 — ተቃራኒ አመለካከት

የተቃራኒውን አስተያየት በተመሳሳይ ጥልቀትና ብቃት አቅርብ።

  • የአንደኛውን አንቀጽ መዋቅርና ጥልቀት አዛምድ — መርማሪዎች ሁለቱን ያነጻጽራሉ
  • እንደ 'Conversely'፣ 'In contrast'፣ 'On the other hand' ያሉ ተቃራኒ ማስተሳሰሪያ ቃላት ተጠቀም
  • አስተያየት ካለህ ይህን አንቀጽ ትንሽ አጠናክር — ነገር ግን ፍትሃዊ ሁን

Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች

On the other hand, critics contend that...However, there is a strong counter-argument...Conversely, many people feel that...
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ማጠቃለያ

ሁለቱን ሃሳቦች አጣምር፤ ወሳኝ ፍርድህን ግልጽ አድርግ።

  • የሁለቱን ወገን ትክክለኛነት አምን — ይህ የአዕምሮ ብስለትህን ያሳያል
  • ምርጫህን በግልጽና በእምነት ግለጽ — አትወዛወዝ
  • ግልጽ አቋም ያዝ — መርማሪዎች ግልጽነትን ይሸልማሉ

Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች

In conclusion, while both sides have merit, I believe that...Having considered both arguments, it seems that...

Step 3

ከፍተኛ ውጤት የሚያስገኙ ቃላት እና ሐረጎች

holistic educationAn educational approach that aims to develop students' intellectual, emotional, social, physical, artistic, and spiritual potentials.
human capital developmentThe process of improving the skills, knowledge, and abilities of a population, which contributes to economic growth and societal progress.
interdisciplinary approachAn educational method that integrates knowledge and methods from different disciplines to address a common problem or topic.
it is widely acknowledged thatA phrase used to introduce a generally accepted fact or belief.
a compelling argument can be madeA phrase used to introduce a strong and convincing point or reason.
this notion is predicated onThis idea or concept is based or dependent upon a particular assumption or principle.
from my perspectiveA phrase used to introduce one's personal opinion or viewpoint.
the evidence overwhelmingly suggestsA phrase indicating that the available data or facts strongly support a particular conclusion.
notwithstandingDespite; in spite of.
it could be argued thatA phrase used to present an argument or idea as a possibility or a point of view, rather than a definitive statement.

Step 4

Academic Phrases for This Essay Type

It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignore

ጭማሬ

MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is more

ቅራኔ

HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConversely

ምክንያት / ውጤት

ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads to

ምሳሌ

For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch as

ስምምነት ወዳለ አቅጣጫ

AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedly

Step 5

Grammar Patterns for Band 7+

የስምምነት ዓረፍተ ነገር

Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.

ከፍተኛ ሰዋሰዋዊ ቁጥጥር ያሳያል። 'Although' ብለህ ጀምር — ተቃራኒ ሃሳብ አምጣ፣ ከዚያ አቋምህን ግለጽ — ጥልቅ አስተሳሰብ ያሳያል።

ሁኔታዊ ዓረፍተ ነገር (Type 2)

If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.

ለምናባዊ ሁኔታዎችና መፍትሔዎች ጥሩ ነው። 'If + past simple, would + infinitive' — ተለዋዋጭነት ያሳያል።

ለacademic ቃና Passive ተጠቀም

It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.

Academic writing passive ዓረፍተ ነገሮችን ይመርጣል። 'It is + past participle + that' — ስልጣናዊና ገለልተኛ ቃና ይሰጣል።

አንጻራዊ ዓረፍተ ነገር

Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.

ውስብስብ ሳይሆን ብቃትን ያሳያል። ለሰዎች 'who'፣ ለነገሮች 'which'፣ ለሁለቱም 'that' ተጠቀም።

ጥቅጥቅ ለማለት የስም ሐረግ

The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.

በጥቂት ቃላት ብዙ መረጃ ያስተላልፋል። 'The implementation of effective policies' እና 'policies are implemented effectively' ይወዳደሩ — Lexical Resource ውጤትን ያሻሽላል።

Step 6

Band 9 ናሙና መልስ (ሙሉ ምዘና)

ሙሉ ናሙና መልሱን እና የፈታኝ አስተያየቶችን ለማየት በነፃ ይመዝገቡ።

ሙሉ ናሙና መልስ ይመልከቱ — በነፃ ይመዝገቡ

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