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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Step 1

このトピックに関するIELTS 試験官のアドバイス

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Ensure your essay dedicates a distinct body paragraph to each of the two opposing views presented in the prompt: one for studying whatever students like, and another for focusing on future-useful subjects. Avoid merging these discussions or giving disproportionate attention to one side, as this can lead to an unbalanced discussion and lower your Task Response score. Your personal opinion should be clearly stated and supported in the conclusion.

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To strengthen your arguments, consider specific examples like how a liberal arts education (studying what one likes) in the US is often credited with fostering well-rounded critical thinkers, or conversely, how countries like South Korea prioritize STEM fields to drive technological advancement and economic competitiveness. Mentioning the global demand for skills in areas like AI or renewable energy can support the 'useful subjects' view.

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A common pitfall is to interpret 'useful in the future' too narrowly, focusing exclusively on STEM without acknowledging other vital fields like healthcare, education, or even certain humanities that foster essential soft skills. To avoid this, ensure your discussion of 'useful subjects' encompasses a broader range of disciplines that contribute to societal well-being and economic stability beyond just science and technology.

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For a clear and coherent structure, use transition phrases that explicitly signal the shift between discussing the first view and the second. For instance, after elaborating on the 'study what they like' view, you could begin the next paragraph with 'Conversely, a strong argument can be made for prioritizing subjects deemed useful for future societal needs.' This ensures a smooth flow and helps the examiner follow your discussion.

5

Examiners look for a nuanced discussion that acknowledges the inherent tension between personal fulfillment and societal needs, rather than presenting a simplistic either/or argument. A band 8-9 essay will demonstrate a sophisticated understanding of how both approaches contribute to a well-rounded society and economy, perhaps suggesting a balanced approach or the importance of transferable skills, while maintaining a clear, well-supported opinion.

Step 2

推奨エッセイ構成(Band 7+ スタンダード)

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イントロダクション

両側を公平に提示し、自分の立場を確立することで熟練度を示す。

  • 両方の視点を理解していることを示す — これは批判的思考を示す
  • どちら側に傾いているかを述べる — 両方を同等に議論している場合でも
  • 中立的で客観的なトーンを保つ — 感情的な言葉や偏りを避ける

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

There are differing opinions on whether...While some people believe that..., others argue that...This essay will examine both perspectives before reaching a conclusion.
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ボディパラグラフ1 — 最初の視点

敬意と信頼性を持って一方の側を提示する。

  • たとえ同意しなくても、実際の例を使ってこの見解を誠実に提示する
  • 客観的な報告表現を使う:『研究によると…』、『調査は示している…』、『専門家は主張する…』
  • 長所を認める — これはバランスの取れた分析を示し、得点につながる

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

On the one hand, supporters of this view argue that...Those in favour point out that...A key argument for this position is...
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ボディパラグラフ2 — 反対の視点

反対意見も同じ深みと洗練さで提示しましょう。

  • 第1段落の構造と深さに合わせてください — 試験官は比較します
  • 対比的な接続詞を使いましょう:『逆に』、『対照的に』、『一方で』
  • 意見がある場合は、この段落を少し強くしましょう — ただし公平さは保って

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

On the other hand, critics contend that...However, there is a strong counter-argument...Conversely, many people feel that...
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結論

両方の見解を統合し、決定的な判断を下しましょう。

  • 両方の側の妥当性を認めましょう — これは知的な成熟度を示します
  • 自分の好みを明確かつ自信を持って述べましょう — 曖昧にしないで
  • 明確な立場を取りましょう — 試験官は曖昧さより明確さを評価します

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

In conclusion, while both sides have merit, I believe that...Having considered both arguments, it seems that...

Step 3

高得点につながる語彙・コロケーション

holistic educationAn educational approach that aims to develop students' intellectual, emotional, social, physical, artistic, and spiritual potentials.
human capital developmentThe process of improving the skills, knowledge, and abilities of a population, which contributes to economic growth and societal progress.
interdisciplinary approachAn educational method that integrates knowledge and methods from different disciplines to address a common problem or topic.
it is widely acknowledged thatA phrase used to introduce a generally accepted fact or belief.
a compelling argument can be madeA phrase used to introduce a strong and convincing point or reason.
this notion is predicated onThis idea or concept is based or dependent upon a particular assumption or principle.
from my perspectiveA phrase used to introduce one's personal opinion or viewpoint.
the evidence overwhelmingly suggestsA phrase indicating that the available data or facts strongly support a particular conclusion.
notwithstandingDespite; in spite of.
it could be argued thatA phrase used to present an argument or idea as a possibility or a point of view, rather than a definitive statement.

Step 4

Academic Phrases for This Essay Type

It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignore

追加

MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is more

対比

HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConversely

原因 / 結果

ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads to

例示

For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch as

譲歩

AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedly

Step 5

Grammar Patterns for Band 7+

譲歩を含む複文

Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.

高度な文法コントロールを示します。「Although/While」+ 反対の見解で始め、自分の立場を述べる — ニュアンスのある思考を示します。

条件法(タイプ2)

If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.

仮想的なシナリオや解決策に最適です。構造:「If + 過去形, would + 不定詞」 — 柔軟性と想像力を示します。

academicのための受動態

It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.

Academic writingは受動構文を好みます。「It is + 過去分詞 + that」は権威的で客観的なトーンを作ります。

関係節

Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.

複雑さを増さずに洗練さを加えます。「who」は人、「which」は物、「that」はどちらにも使います。

密度のための名詞句

The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.

より多くの情報を少ない言葉に詰め込みます。「効果的な政策の実施」対「政策は効果的に実施される」 — Lexical Resourceスコアを向上させます。

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