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Opinionacademic·2018

University students should pay all the costs of their studies because only the university benefits from their research. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Step 1

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When addressing the prompt 'To what extent do you agree or disagree?', it is crucial to state your position unequivocally in the introduction. For instance, if you disagree, clearly state that the premise is flawed because university research yields broad societal benefits beyond the institution itself. To balance, you can dedicate a sentence or two in a body paragraph to acknowledge a minor aspect of the opposing view (e.g., universities do benefit from prestige or occasional patents) before immediately refuting it with your stronger counter-arguments.

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Students could argue that university research is a 'public good' that drives societal advancement, not just institutional profit. For example, medical breakthroughs like vaccine development (e.g., mRNA technology from university research) or fundamental scientific discoveries (like the internet's origins at CERN) have immense global benefits, making government or public funding justifiable. Another argument could highlight how many countries, such as Finland or Norway, heavily subsidize higher education and research, viewing it as an investment in their human capital and knowledge economy, leading to a more skilled workforce and innovation.

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The most common mistake on this question is failing to directly challenge the narrow claim 'only the university benefits from their research.' Many students might discuss the general benefits of education or the burden of tuition fees without specifically addressing the 'research' aspect or the exclusivity implied by 'only.' To avoid this, ensure your arguments consistently focus on the *broader beneficiaries of university research* (e.g., public health, industry, technological progress, cultural enrichment) and explicitly refute the idea that benefits are confined solely to the university.

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For this opinion essay, a highly effective linking strategy is 'Concession-Rebuttal.' Start a paragraph by acknowledging a minor point of the opposing view using phrases like 'While it is true that...' or 'Admittedly, some might argue that...' Immediately follow this with a strong counter-argument introduced by 'However,' 'Nonetheless,' or 'Crucially,' to pivot back to your main stance. This demonstrates a nuanced understanding and strengthens your overall argument by showing you've considered both sides.

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Examiners look for a sophisticated understanding of the economic and social implications of higher education funding and research. A band 8-9 answer will move beyond simple agreement or disagreement to explore the concept of research as a 'public good,' the role of government funding, and the long-term societal dividends. It will employ precise academic vocabulary, complex sentence structures to articulate nuanced arguments, and maintain a consistent, well-developed position that directly and comprehensively addresses the specific claims made in the prompt, particularly challenging the word 'only'.

Step 2

推奨エッセイ構成(Band 7+ スタンダード)

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イントロダクション

採点官の興味を引き、すぐに自分の立場を明確に示しましょう。

  • 強力な類義語を使って質問を言い換える — 言葉をそのままコピーしない
  • 最終文で自分の意見を明確に述べる — 疑いの余地を残さない
  • 簡潔に:最大2〜3文。すべての単語に意味を持たせる。

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

It is often argued that...There is a growing debate about whether...In my view, ... because ...
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ボディパラグラフ1 — 最強の論点

反論の余地のない証拠で、最も説得力のある主張を行う。

  • 力強いトピックセンテンスで始める — 自分の主張を大胆に述べる
  • 具体的な証拠(統計、実例、専門家の研究)で裏付ける
  • 証拠がどのように自分の主張を証明するのかを正確に説明する — 採点官に筋道を示す

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

The primary reason I hold this view is that...This is clearly illustrated by...For instance, in many countries...
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ボディパラグラフ2 — 補足的な論点

補完的な視点で自分の立場を強化する。

  • 異なる角度を選ぶ — パラグラフ1が経済的なら、社会的、環境的、倫理的視点を試す
  • 新しい証拠を使う — 同じ例や論理を繰り返さない
  • 自分の主張に明示的に結びつける — これが全体の立場をどのように強化するかを示す

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

Furthermore, it is worth considering that...Another compelling argument is that...This is further supported by the fact that...
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結論

自信に満ちた印象的な結びで、長く記憶に残る印象を与える。

  • 新しいアイデアを導入しない — これは最終的な要約である
  • イントロダクションよりも強い語彙を使って自分の立場を再提示する
  • 力強く:最大2文。権威を持って締めくくる。

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

In conclusion, I firmly believe that...To sum up, the evidence clearly suggests that...

Step 3

高得点につながる語彙・コロケーション

public goodA commodity or service that is provided without profit to all members of a society, either by the government or a private organization.
societal advancementThe progress and improvement of a society in terms of its knowledge, technology, health, and overall well-being.
knowledge economyAn economic system in which the production of goods and services is based primarily upon knowledge-intensive activities.
predicated onBased on or established upon a particular idea or principle.
compelling argumentAn argument that is forceful, convincing, and difficult to refute.
rigorous academic inquiryThorough, precise, and systematic investigation conducted within an academic context.
from my perspectiveUsed to introduce an opinion or viewpoint, indicating it is the speaker's personal belief.
the evidence overwhelmingly suggestsA phrase used to indicate that a large amount of data or information strongly supports a particular conclusion.
notwithstandingIn spite of; despite.
this is not to say thatUsed to clarify a statement by indicating what is not being implied or asserted.

Step 4

Academic Phrases for This Essay Type

It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignore

追加

MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is more

対比

HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConversely

原因 / 結果

ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads to

例示

For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch as

譲歩

AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedly

Step 5

Grammar Patterns for Band 7+

譲歩を含む複文

Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.

高度な文法コントロールを示します。「Although/While」+ 反対の見解で始め、自分の立場を述べる — ニュアンスのある思考を示します。

条件法(タイプ2)

If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.

仮想的なシナリオや解決策に最適です。構造:「If + 過去形, would + 不定詞」 — 柔軟性と想像力を示します。

academicのための受動態

It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.

Academic writingは受動構文を好みます。「It is + 過去分詞 + that」は権威的で客観的なトーンを作ります。

関係節

Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.

複雑さを増さずに洗練さを加えます。「who」は人、「which」は物、「that」はどちらにも使います。

密度のための名詞句

The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.

より多くの情報を少ない言葉に詰め込みます。「効果的な政策の実施」対「政策は効果的に実施される」 — Lexical Resourceスコアを向上させます。

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