In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Andika angalau maneno 250. Unapaswa kutumia takriban dakika 40 katika kazi hii.
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Step 1
Vidokezo vya Mtahini kwa Mada Hii
For this discussion essay, dedicate one full body paragraph to each of the opposing views presented in the question. Ensure you thoroughly explore the arguments for why high salaries might be good for a country in one paragraph, and then dedicate a separate, equally developed paragraph to the arguments for why governments should limit them. Avoid being too one-sided in your body paragraphs, as this will undermine the "discuss both views" requirement before you present your own opinion in the conclusion.
When discussing the benefits of high salaries, consider mentioning how they attract top global talent and foster innovation, citing examples like the tech industry in Silicon Valley, where lucrative compensation drives groundbreaking advancements. Conversely, when arguing for salary caps, you could refer to the widening income disparity seen in many Western economies, leading to social unrest or a perception of unfairness, and contrast this with more egalitarian models in Nordic countries.
A common mistake students make on this question is to focus excessively on the moral or ethical implications of high salaries without sufficiently linking their arguments back to the economic and societal impact on the country as a whole. To avoid this, ensure every point you make, whether positive or negative, is explicitly connected to how it affects national prosperity, social cohesion, or economic stability, rather than just personal fairness.
To effectively transition between the two opposing views, employ clear linking phrases at the start of your body paragraphs. For instance, after discussing the benefits, you could begin the next paragraph with "Conversely, a strong counter-argument posits that..." or "While some advocate for the merits of high remuneration, others contend that...". Within paragraphs, use phrases like "Furthermore," or "However," to build or contrast points smoothly.
For a band 8-9 answer, examiners look for a nuanced and sophisticated discussion that avoids oversimplification. This means presenting well-developed arguments for both sides, supported by specific examples or logical reasoning, and demonstrating a clear understanding of complex economic and social dynamics. Your personal opinion in the conclusion must be clearly stated and logically derived from the preceding discussion, showcasing a mature and well-reasoned perspective.
Step 2
Muundo wa Aya Unaopendekezwa
1Utangulizi
Tambulisha pande zote mbili za mjadala na utaje ni ipi utakayoizungumzia.
- Monyeshe mtahini kuwa unaelewa mitazamo YOTE MIWILI.
- Kwa hiari, taja upande unaounga mkono.
- Dumisha mtazamo usioegemea upande wowote na wenye uwiano.
Misemo ya Kuanzia
There are differing opinions on whether...While some people believe that..., others argue that...This essay will examine both perspectives before reaching a conclusion.2Aya ya Mwili 1 — Mtazamo wa Kwanza
Wasilisha upande mmoja wa hoja kwa usawa, ukiwa na ushahidi.
- Hata kama hukubaliani, wasilisha mtazamo huu kwa heshima na kwa mfano halisi.
- Tumia lugha ya kuripoti: 'Some argue...', 'Proponents suggest...'
- Malizia kwa kutambua nguvu ya mtazamo huu.
Misemo ya Kuanzia
On the one hand, supporters of this view argue that...Those in favour point out that...A key argument for this position is...3Kifungu cha Mwili 2 — Mtazamo Tofauti
Wasilisha upande mwingine kwa kina na ushahidi sawa.
- Linganisha muundo wa aya ya 1 kwa usawa.
- Tumia maneno ya kuunganisha yenye utofauti ili kuashiria mabadiliko.
- Ikiwa una maoni, aya hii inaweza kuwa na nguvu zaidi kidogo.
Misemo ya Kuanzia
On the other hand, critics contend that...However, there is a strong counter-argument...Conversely, many people feel that...4Hitimisho
Fupisha maoni yote mawili na utoe maoni yako mwenyewe (ikiwa utaulizwa).
- Kubali uhalali wa pande zote mbili
- Taja upendeleo wako waziwazi ikiwa swali linauliza 'give your opinion'
- Usikae katikati kila wakati — chukua msimamo.
Misemo ya Kuanzia
In conclusion, while both sides have merit, I believe that...Having considered both arguments, it seems that...Step 3
Msamiati Muhimu
Step 4
Academic Phrases for This Essay Type
It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignoreKujumlisha
MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is moreTofauti
HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConverselySababu / Athari
ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads toMfano
For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch asRuzuku
AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedlyStep 5
Grammar Patterns for Band 7+
Sentensi changamano yenye konsesheni
Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.
Inamwonyesha mtahini kuwa unaweza kushughulikia sentensi tegemezi. Anza na 'Although/While' + mtazamo tofauti, kisha toa mtazamo wako.
Masharti (Aina ya 2)
If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.
Inafaa kwa hoja na suluhisho za kinadharia. 'If + past simple, would + infinitive'.
Sauti ya utendaji kwa ajili ya sauti ya kitaaluma
It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.
Uandishi wa kitaaluma unapendelea matumizi ya sauti ya upatanishi. 'It is + past participle + that' inasikika kuwa na mamlaka.
Kifungu cha uhusiano
Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.
Vifungu vya uhusiano huongeza maelezo bila kuanza sentensi mpya. Tumia 'who' kwa watu, 'which' kwa vitu.
Kifungu cha nomino kwa msongamano
The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.
Weka taarifa katika virai nomino badala ya kutumia sentensi nyingi fupi. Hii itakusaidia kupata alama za juu katika Lexical Resource.
Step 6
Jibu la Mfano
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