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Discussionacademic·2025

Some say that because many people are living much longer, the retirement age should be raised. Others argue that older people should be allowed to retire earlier. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (Note: education context in some recalls)

Andika angalau maneno 250. Unapaswa kutumia takriban dakika 40 katika kazi hii.

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Step 1

Vidokezo vya Mtahini kwa Mada Hii

1

For this discussion essay, ensure you dedicate a distinct body paragraph to each side of the argument: one for raising the retirement age and another for earlier retirement. Avoid the common pitfall of heavily favoring one side throughout the essay before the conclusion, as this undermines the 'discuss both views' requirement.

2

When discussing raising the retirement age, consider arguments like the fiscal strain on national pension schemes due to increased life expectancy, as seen in countries like Japan or Germany. For earlier retirement, you could mention the need to create job opportunities for younger generations or the potential for older workers to contribute to society in new ways post-retirement.

3

A frequent error on this question is failing to adequately connect the premise of 'living much longer' to the arguments for raising the retirement age. Students often jump directly into economic arguments without explicitly linking them to demographic shifts, so ensure you establish this causal relationship clearly in your first body paragraph.

4

To transition smoothly between discussing the two opposing views, use phrases like 'Conversely,' 'On the other hand,' or 'While the aforementioned arguments advocate for a later retirement, proponents of earlier retirement contend that...' This clearly signals to the examiner that you are shifting focus to the alternative perspective.

5

For a band 8-9, examiners look for a nuanced discussion that explores the socio-economic implications of both views, not just stating them. This includes demonstrating an understanding of concepts like demographic shifts, fiscal sustainability of pension systems, and intergenerational equity, all while maintaining a consistent and well-supported personal opinion.

Step 2

Muundo wa Aya Unaopendekezwa

1
Utangulizi

Tambulisha pande zote mbili za mjadala na utaje ni ipi utakayoizungumzia.

  • Monyeshe mtahini kuwa unaelewa mitazamo YOTE MIWILI.
  • Kwa hiari, taja upande unaounga mkono.
  • Dumisha mtazamo usioegemea upande wowote na wenye uwiano.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

There are differing opinions on whether...While some people believe that..., others argue that...This essay will examine both perspectives before reaching a conclusion.
2
Aya ya Mwili 1 — Mtazamo wa Kwanza

Wasilisha upande mmoja wa hoja kwa usawa, ukiwa na ushahidi.

  • Hata kama hukubaliani, wasilisha mtazamo huu kwa heshima na kwa mfano halisi.
  • Tumia lugha ya kuripoti: 'Some argue...', 'Proponents suggest...'
  • Malizia kwa kutambua nguvu ya mtazamo huu.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

On the one hand, supporters of this view argue that...Those in favour point out that...A key argument for this position is...
3
Kifungu cha Mwili 2 — Mtazamo Tofauti

Wasilisha upande mwingine kwa kina na ushahidi sawa.

  • Linganisha muundo wa aya ya 1 kwa usawa.
  • Tumia maneno ya kuunganisha yenye utofauti ili kuashiria mabadiliko.
  • Ikiwa una maoni, aya hii inaweza kuwa na nguvu zaidi kidogo.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

On the other hand, critics contend that...However, there is a strong counter-argument...Conversely, many people feel that...
4
Hitimisho

Fupisha maoni yote mawili na utoe maoni yako mwenyewe (ikiwa utaulizwa).

  • Kubali uhalali wa pande zote mbili
  • Taja upendeleo wako waziwazi ikiwa swali linauliza 'give your opinion'
  • Usikae katikati kila wakati — chukua msimamo.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

In conclusion, while both sides have merit, I believe that...Having considered both arguments, it seems that...

Step 3

Msamiati Muhimu

demographic shiftA change in the characteristics of a population, such as age structure or birth rates.
fiscal sustainabilityThe ability of a government or system to maintain its financial commitments in the long term without incurring excessive debt.
intergenerational equityThe concept of fairness or justice in the distribution of resources and burdens between different generations.
it is widely acknowledged thatA phrase used to introduce a generally accepted fact or belief.
a compelling argument can be madeA phrase used to introduce a strong and persuasive point.
this notion is predicated onThis idea or belief is based on or depends on a particular assumption or principle.
from my perspectiveA phrase used to indicate a personal viewpoint or opinion.
the evidence overwhelmingly suggestsA phrase indicating that there is a very strong amount of support for a particular conclusion or idea.
notwithstandingDespite; in spite of.
this is not to say thatA phrase used to clarify that a previous statement does not imply something else, or to introduce a qualification.

Step 4

Academic Phrases for This Essay Type

It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignore

Kujumlisha

MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is more

Tofauti

HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConversely

Sababu / Athari

ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads to

Mfano

For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch as

Ruzuku

AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedly

Step 5

Grammar Patterns for Band 7+

Sentensi changamano yenye konsesheni

Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.

Inamwonyesha mtahini kuwa unaweza kushughulikia sentensi tegemezi. Anza na 'Although/While' + mtazamo tofauti, kisha toa mtazamo wako.

Masharti (Aina ya 2)

If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.

Inafaa kwa hoja na suluhisho za kinadharia. 'If + past simple, would + infinitive'.

Sauti ya utendaji kwa ajili ya sauti ya kitaaluma

It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.

Uandishi wa kitaaluma unapendelea matumizi ya sauti ya upatanishi. 'It is + past participle + that' inasikika kuwa na mamlaka.

Kifungu cha uhusiano

Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.

Vifungu vya uhusiano huongeza maelezo bila kuanza sentensi mpya. Tumia 'who' kwa watu, 'which' kwa vitu.

Kifungu cha nomino kwa msongamano

The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.

Weka taarifa katika virai nomino badala ya kutumia sentensi nyingi fupi. Hii itakusaidia kupata alama za juu katika Lexical Resource.

Step 6

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