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Advantages-Disadvantagesacademic·2018

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

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Step 1

IELTS Mga payo ng examiner para sa paksa na ito

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When tackling 'To what extent do the advantages... outweigh the disadvantages?', structure your essay with one body paragraph dedicated to the advantages and another to the disadvantages. Crucially, your introduction and conclusion must take a clear, consistent position on whether the advantages indeed outweigh the disadvantages, or vice versa.

2

Consider arguments such as the 'silver economy' where older consumers drive demand for specific goods and services, or the invaluable experience and mentorship older professionals can offer in a multi-generational workforce. Conversely, you could discuss the strain on public healthcare systems and pension funds, as seen in countries like Japan, which faces significant demographic challenges.

3

The most common mistake is failing to explicitly address 'to what extent' and instead simply listing pros and cons without comparison or evaluation. To avoid this, use comparative language throughout your body paragraphs (e.g., 'while X presents a challenge, Y offers a more significant benefit') and ensure your conclusion directly answers the 'outweigh' question with a well-reasoned justification.

4

Employ transition phrases that facilitate comparison and concession, such as 'While it is true that an ageing population presents certain fiscal burdens, it simultaneously fosters a wealth of social capital.' Use 'Conversely,' to introduce the opposing viewpoint and 'Nevertheless,' or 'Despite these challenges,' to pivot back to your main argument or offer a nuanced perspective.

5

Examiners awarding band 8-9 look for a nuanced discussion that doesn't just list points but critically evaluates the *extent* to which one side outweighs the other, using sophisticated vocabulary related to demographics, economics, and social policy. Your arguments should be well-developed, demonstrating a clear understanding of the complex interplay between societal benefits and governmental challenges, supported by precise examples and a consistently maintained, well-justified position.

Step 2

Inirerekomendang Isturktura ng Sanaysay (Band 7+ Standard)

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Panimula

Kumbinsihin agad ang examiner at ipakita ang iyong posisyon.

  • Iparaphrase ang tanong gamit ang malalakas na sinonimo — iwasan ang kopya ng mga salita
  • Ipaunawa nang malinaw ang iyong opinyon sa huling pangungusap — huwag mag-iiwan ng duda
  • Panatilihin ito maikli: 2–3 pangungusap lamang. Bawat salita ay dapat may saysay.

Band 7 Mga simula ng pangungusap para sa bawat talata

It is often argued that...There is a growing debate about whether...In my view, ... because ...
2
Unang Talata — Pinakamalakas na Argumento Mo

Gumamit ng pinakamakapangyarihang rason na may hindi mapagtatagpuang ebidensya.

  • Simulan sa malakas na paksang pangungusap — ipahayag ang iyong argumento nang may tapang
  • Suportahan ng konkretong ebidensya: estadistika, tunay na kaso, o pananaliksik ng eksperto
  • Ipaliwanag nang eksakto KUNG PAANO pinatutunayan ng ebidensya ang iyong punto — i-connect ang mga dots para sa examiner

Band 7 Mga simula ng pangungusap para sa bawat talata

The primary reason I hold this view is that...This is clearly illustrated by...For instance, in many countries...
3
Pangalawang Talata — Suportang Argumento

Palakasin ang iyong posisyon gamit ang komplementaryong pananaw.

  • Pumili ng ibang anggulo — kung pang-ekonomiya ang una, subukan ang panlipunan, pangkapaligiran, o pang-etika
  • Gamitin ang bagong ebidensya — iwasan ang pag-uulit ng parehong halimbawa o rason
  • I-link nang direkta sa iyong thesis — ipakita kung paano ito palakasin ang buong posisyon mo

Band 7 Mga simula ng pangungusap para sa bawat talata

Furthermore, it is worth considering that...Another compelling argument is that...This is further supported by the fact that...
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Konklusyon

Mag-iwan ng matibay na impresyon gamit ang tiyak at nakaaalala mong wakas.

  • Huwag kailanman mag-introduce ng bagong ideya — ito ay iyong huling buod lamang
  • I-ulit ang iyong posisyon gamit ang mas malakas na bokabularyo kaysa sa panimula
  • Panatilihin itong makapangyarihan: 2 pangungusap lamang. Tapusin nang may awtoridad.

Band 7 Mga simula ng pangungusap para sa bawat talata

In conclusion, I firmly believe that...To sum up, the evidence clearly suggests that...

Step 3

Mataas na markang bokabularyo at mga collocation

ageing demographicA population in which the proportion of older individuals is increasing.
silver economyThe economic activities and markets catering to the needs and demands of older people.
intergenerational solidarityThe mutual support and cohesion between different age groups within a society.
a compelling argument can be madeA strong and convincing case can be presented.
it is widely acknowledged thatIt is generally accepted or recognized by many.
this notion is predicated onThis idea or concept is based or founded upon.
from my perspectiveIn my personal view or opinion.
the evidence overwhelmingly suggestsThe available facts and data strongly indicate.
notwithstandingIn spite of; despite.
it could be argued thatA possible point or perspective that can be put forward.

Step 4

Academic Phrases for This Essay Type

It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignore

Dagdag

MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is more

Kontrasta

HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConversely

Dahilan / Epekto

ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads to

Halimbawa

For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch as

Pagsang-ayon sa kabaliktaran

AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedly

Step 5

Grammar Patterns for Band 7+

Kumplikadong pangungusap na may pagsang-ayon sa kabaliktaran

Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.

Nagpapakita ng advanced na grammatical control. Simulan sa 'Although/While' + kabaligtarang pananaw, tapos ipahayag ang iyong posisyon — nagpapakita ng nuanced thinking.

Conditional (Type 2)

If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.

Perpekto para sa hypothetical na sitwasyon at solusyon. Struktura: 'If + past simple, would + infinitive' — nagpapakita ng flexibility at imagination.

Passive para sa academic na tono

It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.

Academic writing ay pabor sa passive constructions. 'It is + past participle + that' ay lumilikha ng authoritative at objective na tono.

Relative clause

Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.

Nagdaragdag ng sophistication nang hindi komplikado. Gamitin ang 'who' para sa tao, 'which' para sa bagay, 'that' para sa alinman.

Noun phrase para sa density

The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.

Nakakapack ng higit na impormasyon sa mas kaunting salita. 'The implementation of effective policies' vs 'policies are implemented effectively' — tumataas ang Lexical Resource score.

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Band 9 Halimbawang sagot (buong na binigyan ng marka)

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