Some believe that the development of technology helps to reduce crime, while others think that it encourages criminals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Step 1
IELTS ፈታኝ ምክሮች ለዚህ ርዕስ
For this 'discuss both views and give your opinion' essay, dedicate one full body paragraph to the view that technology reduces crime, and a separate, equally developed paragraph to the view that it encourages criminals. Avoid presenting your personal opinion until the conclusion, ensuring both perspectives are explored neutrally and thoroughly in the main body.
When discussing how technology reduces crime, consider examples like advanced CCTV networks with facial recognition, sophisticated digital forensics for evidence collection (e.g., DNA analysis in the UK), or predictive policing algorithms used in some US cities. For technology encouraging crime, focus on the rise of cyber-criminality (phishing, ransomware attacks), the use of encrypted communication by criminal organizations, and the dark web facilitating illicit trade.
The most common mistake students make on this question is discussing technology's general pros and cons without explicitly linking them to crime reduction or encouragement. To avoid this, ensure every point and example you provide directly addresses how technology either deters criminal activity or, conversely, empowers criminals and creates new avenues for crime.
To effectively transition between the two opposing views, use clear contrasting linking phrases. For instance, after discussing crime reduction, you could begin the next body paragraph with phrases like 'Conversely,' 'However, an alternative perspective posits that,' or 'While the aforementioned points highlight technology's deterrent effect, it is equally important to consider its role in fostering criminal enterprise.'
For a band 8-9 answer to this specific question, examiners look for a nuanced discussion that avoids oversimplification, demonstrating a deep understanding of the complex interplay between technology and crime. This includes using precise, topic-specific vocabulary, presenting well-developed arguments supported by relevant examples, and offering a clear, logically justified personal opinion that synthesizes the preceding discussion, rather than just repeating points.
Step 2
የሚመከር የድርሰት አወቃቀር (Band 7+ ደረጃ)
1መግቢያ
ሁለቱን ወገኖች ፍትሃዊ በሆነ መንገድ አቅርቦ አቋምህን አሳይ።
- ሁለቱንም አመለካከቶች መረዳትህን አሳይ — ይህ ወሳኝ አስተሳሰብህን ያሳያል
- ወደ የት እንደምትደግፍ ግለጽ — ሁለቱን እኩል ብትዳስስም
- academic ቃና ጠብቅ — ስሜታዊ ቋንቋ ወይም አድልዎ ያስወግዱ
Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች
There are differing opinions on whether...While some people believe that..., others argue that...This essay will examine both perspectives before reaching a conclusion.2አካል አንቀጽ 1 — የመጀመሪያ አመለካከት
አንድ ወገን በአክብሮት እና በአሳማኝ መንገድ አቅርብ።
- ባትስማማም፣ ይህን አመለካከት በእውነተኛ ምሳሌ ቀጥተኛ አቅርብ
- academic የሪፖርት ቋንቋ ተጠቀም፡ 'Research indicates...', 'Studies show...', 'Experts argue...'
- ጠንካራ ነጥቦቹን አምን — ይህ ሚዛናዊ ትንተናህን ያሳያል እና ነጥብ ያስገኛል
Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች
On the one hand, supporters of this view argue that...Those in favour point out that...A key argument for this position is...3አካል አንቀጽ 2 — ተቃራኒ አመለካከት
የተቃራኒውን አስተያየት በተመሳሳይ ጥልቀትና ብቃት አቅርብ።
- የአንደኛውን አንቀጽ መዋቅርና ጥልቀት አዛምድ — መርማሪዎች ሁለቱን ያነጻጽራሉ
- እንደ 'Conversely'፣ 'In contrast'፣ 'On the other hand' ያሉ ተቃራኒ ማስተሳሰሪያ ቃላት ተጠቀም
- አስተያየት ካለህ ይህን አንቀጽ ትንሽ አጠናክር — ነገር ግን ፍትሃዊ ሁን
Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች
On the other hand, critics contend that...However, there is a strong counter-argument...Conversely, many people feel that...4ማጠቃለያ
ሁለቱን ሃሳቦች አጣምር፤ ወሳኝ ፍርድህን ግልጽ አድርግ።
- የሁለቱን ወገን ትክክለኛነት አምን — ይህ የአዕምሮ ብስለትህን ያሳያል
- ምርጫህን በግልጽና በእምነት ግለጽ — አትወዛወዝ
- ግልጽ አቋም ያዝ — መርማሪዎች ግልጽነትን ይሸልማሉ
Band 7+ ለእያንዳንዱ አንቀጽ የሚሆኑ የዓረፍተ ነገር ጀምሮዎች
In conclusion, while both sides have merit, I believe that...Having considered both arguments, it seems that...Step 3
ከፍተኛ ውጤት የሚያስገኙ ቃላት እና ሐረጎች
Step 4
Academic Phrases for This Essay Type
It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignoreጭማሬ
MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is moreቅራኔ
HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConverselyምክንያት / ውጤት
ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads toምሳሌ
For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch asስምምነት ወዳለ አቅጣጫ
AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedlyStep 5
Grammar Patterns for Band 7+
የስምምነት ዓረፍተ ነገር
Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.
ከፍተኛ ሰዋሰዋዊ ቁጥጥር ያሳያል። 'Although' ብለህ ጀምር — ተቃራኒ ሃሳብ አምጣ፣ ከዚያ አቋምህን ግለጽ — ጥልቅ አስተሳሰብ ያሳያል።
ሁኔታዊ ዓረፍተ ነገር (Type 2)
If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.
ለምናባዊ ሁኔታዎችና መፍትሔዎች ጥሩ ነው። 'If + past simple, would + infinitive' — ተለዋዋጭነት ያሳያል።
ለacademic ቃና Passive ተጠቀም
It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.
Academic writing passive ዓረፍተ ነገሮችን ይመርጣል። 'It is + past participle + that' — ስልጣናዊና ገለልተኛ ቃና ይሰጣል።
አንጻራዊ ዓረፍተ ነገር
Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.
ውስብስብ ሳይሆን ብቃትን ያሳያል። ለሰዎች 'who'፣ ለነገሮች 'which'፣ ለሁለቱም 'that' ተጠቀም።
ጥቅጥቅ ለማለት የስም ሐረግ
The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.
በጥቂት ቃላት ብዙ መረጃ ያስተላልፋል። 'The implementation of effective policies' እና 'policies are implemented effectively' ይወዳደሩ — Lexical Resource ውጤትን ያሻሽላል።
Step 6
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ሙሉ ናሙና መልሱን እና የፈታኝ አስተያየቶችን ለማየት በነፃ ይመዝገቡ።
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