Some believe that the development of technology helps to reduce crime, while others think that it encourages criminals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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For this 'discuss both views and give your opinion' essay, dedicate one full body paragraph to the view that technology reduces crime, and a separate, equally developed paragraph to the view that it encourages criminals. Avoid presenting your personal opinion until the conclusion, ensuring both perspectives are explored neutrally and thoroughly in the main body.
When discussing how technology reduces crime, consider examples like advanced CCTV networks with facial recognition, sophisticated digital forensics for evidence collection (e.g., DNA analysis in the UK), or predictive policing algorithms used in some US cities. For technology encouraging crime, focus on the rise of cyber-criminality (phishing, ransomware attacks), the use of encrypted communication by criminal organizations, and the dark web facilitating illicit trade.
The most common mistake students make on this question is discussing technology's general pros and cons without explicitly linking them to crime reduction or encouragement. To avoid this, ensure every point and example you provide directly addresses how technology either deters criminal activity or, conversely, empowers criminals and creates new avenues for crime.
To effectively transition between the two opposing views, use clear contrasting linking phrases. For instance, after discussing crime reduction, you could begin the next body paragraph with phrases like 'Conversely,' 'However, an alternative perspective posits that,' or 'While the aforementioned points highlight technology's deterrent effect, it is equally important to consider its role in fostering criminal enterprise.'
For a band 8-9 answer to this specific question, examiners look for a nuanced discussion that avoids oversimplification, demonstrating a deep understanding of the complex interplay between technology and crime. This includes using precise, topic-specific vocabulary, presenting well-developed arguments supported by relevant examples, and offering a clear, logically justified personal opinion that synthesizes the preceding discussion, rather than just repeating points.
Step 2
Inirerekomendang Isturktura ng Sanaysay (Band 7+ Standard)
1Panimula
Ipakita ang galing sa pamamagitan ng patas na pagpapakita ng parehong panig at pagtatakda ng iyong posisyon.
- Ipakita ang pag-unawa sa PAREHONG pananaw — ito ang nagpapakita ng critical thinking
- Sabihin kung alin sa dalawa ang pinapanigan mo — kahit sabihin mo lang na pareho kayong tinatalakay
- Panatilihin ang neutral na tono — iwasan ang emosyonal na lenguahe o bias
Band 7 Mga simula ng pangungusap para sa bawat talata
There are differing opinions on whether...While some people believe that..., others argue that...This essay will examine both perspectives before reaching a conclusion.2Unang Talata — Unang Pananaw
Ipresenta ang isang panig nang may respeto at kredibilidad.
- Kahit na hindi ka sang-ayon, ipresenta ito nang totoo kasama ang tunay na halimbawa
- Gamitin ang neutral na reporting language: «Nagpapahiwatig ng pananaliksik...», «Itinuturo ng mga pag-aaral...», «Inaangkin ng mga eksperto...»
- Tanggapin ang mga lakas nito — ipinapakita nito ang balanseng analisis at nakakakuha ng puntos
Band 7 Mga simula ng pangungusap para sa bawat talata
On the one hand, supporters of this view argue that...Those in favour point out that...A key argument for this position is...3Pangalawang Talata — Kasalungat na Pananaw
Ipresenta ang kontra-argumento nang may parehong lalim at kahusayan.
- Sundin ang istruktura at lalim ng Unang Talata — pinaghahambing ng mga examiner ang dalawa
- Gamitin ang mga salitang pang-ugnay na nagpapakita ng pagkakaiba: «Kasalungat», «Sa kabilang banda», «Sa ibang panig»
- Kung may opinyon ka, gawin ang talatang ito nang bahagyang mas malakas — pero manatiling patas
Band 7 Mga simula ng pangungusap para sa bawat talata
On the other hand, critics contend that...However, there is a strong counter-argument...Conversely, many people feel that...4Konklusyon
Buoin ang parehong pananaw at ipahayag ang iyong malinaw na penomeno.
- Tanggapin ang katotohanan ng parehong panig — ito ang nagpapakita ng kaisipang nakabatay sa karanasan
- Ipaunawa nang malinaw at may tiwala ang iyong panigan — huwag magduda o magpabaya
- Kumuha ng matatag na posisyon — pinahahalagahan ng mga examiner ang kalinawan kaysa sa pag-iwas sa desisyon
Band 7 Mga simula ng pangungusap para sa bawat talata
In conclusion, while both sides have merit, I believe that...Having considered both arguments, it seems that...Step 3
Mataas na markang bokabularyo at mga collocation
Step 4
Academic Phrases for This Essay Type
It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignoreDagdag
MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is moreKontrasta
HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConverselyDahilan / Epekto
ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads toHalimbawa
For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch asPagsang-ayon sa kabaliktaran
AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedlyStep 5
Grammar Patterns for Band 7+
Kumplikadong pangungusap na may pagsang-ayon sa kabaliktaran
Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.
Nagpapakita ng advanced na grammatical control. Simulan sa 'Although/While' + kabaligtarang pananaw, tapos ipahayag ang iyong posisyon — nagpapakita ng nuanced thinking.
Conditional (Type 2)
If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.
Perpekto para sa hypothetical na sitwasyon at solusyon. Struktura: 'If + past simple, would + infinitive' — nagpapakita ng flexibility at imagination.
Passive para sa academic na tono
It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.
Academic writing ay pabor sa passive constructions. 'It is + past participle + that' ay lumilikha ng authoritative at objective na tono.
Relative clause
Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.
Nagdaragdag ng sophistication nang hindi komplikado. Gamitin ang 'who' para sa tao, 'which' para sa bagay, 'that' para sa alinman.
Noun phrase para sa density
The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.
Nakakapack ng higit na impormasyon sa mas kaunting salita. 'The implementation of effective policies' vs 'policies are implemented effectively' — tumataas ang Lexical Resource score.
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