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Opinionacademic·2024

Some people think that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Step 1

이 주제에 대한 IELTS 시험관 팁

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When stating your position, be unequivocally clear in your introduction (e.g., 'I largely disagree with this proposition' or 'I strongly agree that this is a viable solution'). Throughout your essay, ensure every body paragraph supports this stance. To balance acknowledging the other side, use phrases like 'While it is true that higher fuel costs could deter some drivers, this approach fails to address...' in a concessive clause, immediately followed by a strong reassertion of your main argument.

2

For specific arguments, consider the regressive impact on lower-income households, which might disproportionately suffer from increased fuel costs, making it an inequitable solution. Alternatively, argue for investment in robust public transportation networks, citing examples like the efficient systems in European cities (e.g., Copenhagen's cycling infrastructure or Germany's extensive rail network) as a more sustainable alternative. You could also highlight the potential of technological advancements, such as government subsidies for electric vehicles (EVs) or research into alternative fuels, as a long-term, less punitive solution.

3

The most common mistake students make on this question is focusing too heavily on the *economic* impact of fuel costs without consistently linking it back to the *environmental* problem or offering alternative environmental solutions. To avoid this, ensure that every point you make, whether discussing economic hardship or infrastructure needs, ultimately circles back to how it either helps or hinders the goal of solving environmental problems, maintaining the core focus of the question.

4

A highly effective linking strategy for this essay type, especially when arguing against a proposed solution, is to use a 'problem-solution' or 'cause-effect' structure within and between paragraphs. For instance, after outlining the negative effects of increased fuel costs (e.g., 'This punitive measure would inevitably lead to...'), transition to a more effective alternative using phrases like 'Instead, a more equitable and sustainable approach would involve...' or 'Consequently, a comprehensive strategy must also encompass...'. This demonstrates a logical flow and a nuanced understanding.

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Examiners look for a nuanced and well-developed argument that goes beyond a simplistic 'yes/no' answer. For a band 8-9, your essay should demonstrate an awareness of the complexities involved, discussing not just the immediate impact but also the long-term implications, social equity, and alternative policy solutions. This includes sophisticated vocabulary related to environmental policy and economics, precise grammatical control, and a consistently clear, coherent, and cohesive argument that fully addresses all aspects of the prompt.

Step 2

권장 에세이 구조 (Band 7+ 표준)

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소개

시험관의 관심을 끌고 즉시 본인의 입장을 확실히 밝히세요.

  • 강력한 동의어를 사용해 질문을 재구성하세요 — 단어를 그대로 복사하지 마세요
  • 마지막 문장에서 본인의 의견을 명확히 밝히세요 — 의심의 여지가 없도록
  • 간결하게: 최대 2-3문장. 모든 단어가 제 역할을 해야 합니다.

각 단락별 Band 7+ 문장 시작 표현

It is often argued that...There is a growing debate about whether...In my view, ... because ...
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본문 1단락 — 가장 강력한 주장

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각 단락별 Band 7+ 문장 시작 표현

The primary reason I hold this view is that...This is clearly illustrated by...For instance, in many countries...
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본문 2단락 — 보조 주장

보완적인 관점으로 입장을 강화하세요.

  • 다른 각도를 선택하세요 — 1단락이 경제적이었다면 사회적, 환경적, 윤리적 접근을 시도하세요
  • 새로운 근거를 사용하세요 — 같은 예시나 논리를 반복하지 마세요
  • 본인의 논지로 명시적으로 연결하세요 — 이것이 전체 입장을 어떻게 강화하는지 보여주세요

각 단락별 Band 7+ 문장 시작 표현

Furthermore, it is worth considering that...Another compelling argument is that...This is further supported by the fact that...
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결론

자신감 있고 기억에 남는 마무리로 지속적인 인상을 남기세요.

  • 새로운 아이디어를 도입하지 마세요 — 이것은 최종 요약입니다
  • 소개보다 더 강력한 어휘를 사용해 본인의 입장을 재진술하세요
  • 강력하게: 최대 2문장. 권위 있게 끝내세요.

각 단락별 Band 7+ 문장 시작 표현

In conclusion, I firmly believe that...To sum up, the evidence clearly suggests that...

Step 3

고득점 어휘 & 연어

carbon footprintThe total amount of greenhouse gases, primarily carbon dioxide, released into the atmosphere by a particular human activity or accumulated over the lifetime of a product.
sustainable mobilityTransportation methods that have a low impact on the environment and are accessible, affordable, and efficient for all members of society.
fossil fuel dependencyThe reliance of a society or economy on fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) for its energy needs.
a compelling argument can be madeAn academic phrase used to introduce a strong and persuasive point.
it is widely acknowledged thatAn academic phrase indicating a generally accepted truth or common understanding.
this notion is predicated onAn academic phrase meaning that an idea or belief is based on or depends on a particular assumption or principle.
from my perspectiveAn opinion phrase used to introduce your personal viewpoint or belief.
the evidence overwhelmingly suggestsAn opinion phrase used to indicate that there is a great deal of strong data or information supporting a particular conclusion.
notwithstandingA linking phrase meaning 'despite' or 'in spite of', used to introduce a contrasting point that does not prevent the main statement from being true.
it could be argued thatA hedging phrase used to introduce a possible argument or viewpoint, often to acknowledge a counter-argument or present a nuanced perspective.

Step 4

Academic Phrases for This Essay Type

It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignore

추가

MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is more

대조

HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConversely

원인 / 결과

ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads to

예시

For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch as

양보

AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedly

Step 5

Grammar Patterns for Band 7+

양보절이 포함된 복잡한 문장

Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.

고급 문법 통제력을 보여줍니다. 'Althoughname' + 반대 의견으로 시작한 후 본인의 입장을 밝히세요 — 미묘한 사고를 보여줍니다.

조건문 (Type 2)

If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.

가상 시나리오와 해결책에 완벽합니다. 구조: 'If + 과거 단순형, would + 원형 부정사' — 유연성과 상상력을 보여줍니다.

name 톤을 위한 수동태

It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.

score name는 수동 구문을 선호합니다. 'It is + 과거 분사 + that'는 권위 있고 객관적인 톤을 만듭니다.

관계절

Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.

복잡함 없이 정교함을 더합니다. 사람은 'who', 사물은 'which', 둘 다는 'that'을 사용하세요.

밀도를 위한 명사구

The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.

더 적은 단어에 더 많은 정보를 담습니다. '효과적인 정책의 시행' vs '정책이 효과적으로 시행된다' — name 점수를 높입니다.

Step 6

Band 9 모범 답안 (완전 채점됨)

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