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Two-Partacademic·2021

In many countries, people now wear western-style clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Step 1

Vidokezo vya Mtahini kwa Mada Hii

1

To achieve a high score, you must explicitly address both parts of the question. Dedicate one body paragraph to explaining the reasons why people wear Western-style clothes and another distinct body paragraph to evaluating whether this is a positive or negative development, ensuring your stance is clear.

2

When discussing 'why,' consider the pervasive influence of globalization, media (e.g., Hollywood, K-pop), and the practical advantages of Western clothing in modern workplaces. For the 'positive/negative' aspect, you could argue it's negative due to cultural erosion and loss of traditional craftsmanship, or positive for promoting a sense of global identity and offering greater comfort and versatility for individuals in various socio-economic contexts.

3

A common mistake on this question is making sweeping generalizations without nuance. Avoid stating that traditional clothing has 'completely disappeared' or that the trend is 'entirely negative.' Instead, acknowledge that traditional attire often coexists with Western styles, or that the impact can be mixed, using phrases like 'in many contexts' or 'it could be argued that this presents a dual impact.'

4

For this two-part essay, ensure a clear transition between addressing the causes and evaluating the impact. Use a strong linking phrase at the start of your second main body paragraph, such as 'Turning to the implications of this widespread adoption,' or 'While the reasons for this shift are multifaceted, its impact on societies warrants careful consideration.'

5

Examiners look for a nuanced discussion that avoids simplistic answers. A band 8-9 response will demonstrate a sophisticated understanding of the complex interplay between globalization, cultural identity, and individual choice, supported by well-developed arguments and precise, academic vocabulary, rather than just listing reasons and opinions.

Step 2

Muundo wa Aya Unaopendekezwa

1
Utangulizi

Eleza swali kwa maneno yako mwenyewe na ueleze wazi msimamo WAKO.

  • Usinakili swali neno kwa neno — ubadilishe kwa kutumia maneno yenye maana sawa.
  • Toa maoni yako katika sentensi ya mwisho ya utangulizi.
  • Usizidi sentensi mbili au tatu.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

It is often argued that...There is a growing debate about whether...In my view, ... because ...
2
Kifungu cha Mwili 1 — Hoja Kuu

Wasilisha hoja yako yenye nguvu zaidi kwa mfano maalum.

  • Anza na sentensi ya mada iliyo wazi inayoelezea hoja.
  • Toa usaidizi kwa mfano maalum, takwimu, au kisa halisi cha ulimwengu.
  • Eleza KWA NINI mfano huu unaunga mkono hoja yako.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

The primary reason I hold this view is that...This is clearly illustrated by...For instance, in many countries...
3
Kifungu cha Mwili 2 — Hoja ya Kusaidia

Ongeza hoja ya pili inayounga mkono msimamo wako kutoka kwa mtazamo tofauti.

  • Chagua mtazamo tofauti — ikiwa aya ya 1 ilikuwa ya kiuchumi, jaribu ya kijamii au ya kimazingira.
  • Tumia aina tofauti ya ushahidi (uchunguzi wa kibinafsi, utafiti, mantiki)
  • Unganisha tena na hoja yako kuu.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

Furthermore, it is worth considering that...Another compelling argument is that...This is further supported by the fact that...
4
Hitimisho

Rudia maoni yako na ufupishe hoja zako kuu.

  • USIanzishe mawazo mapya katika hitimisho
  • Eleza msimamo wako kwa kutumia maneno tofauti na yale yaliyotumiwa katika utangulizi.
  • Iweke kwa sentensi mbili.

Misemo ya Kuanzia

In conclusion, I firmly believe that...To sum up, the evidence clearly suggests that...

Step 3

Msamiati Muhimu

cultural erosionThe gradual wearing away or destruction of a culture, often due to external influences.
globalized fashion trendsStyles and designs in clothing that become popular across different countries and cultures due to international influence and media.
socio-economic mobilityThe ability of individuals or groups to move between different social classes or economic positions within a society.
it is widely acknowledged thatA phrase used to introduce a statement that is generally accepted as true or commonly believed.
a compelling argument can be madeUsed to introduce a strong and persuasive point or reason.
this notion is predicated onIndicates that an idea or belief is based upon or dependent on a particular principle or assumption.
from my perspectiveA phrase used to introduce one's personal opinion or viewpoint.
the evidence overwhelmingly suggestsUsed to indicate that there is a great deal of support or proof for a particular conclusion.
notwithstandingDespite; in spite of; nevertheless.
it could be argued thatA phrase used to introduce a possible interpretation or argument, often with a degree of caution or to acknowledge complexity.

Step 4

Academic Phrases for This Essay Type

It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignore

Kujumlisha

MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is more

Tofauti

HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConversely

Sababu / Athari

ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads to

Mfano

For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch as

Ruzuku

AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedly

Step 5

Grammar Patterns for Band 7+

Sentensi changamano yenye konsesheni

Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.

Inamwonyesha mtahini kuwa unaweza kushughulikia sentensi tegemezi. Anza na 'Although/While' + mtazamo tofauti, kisha toa mtazamo wako.

Masharti (Aina ya 2)

If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.

Inafaa kwa hoja na suluhisho za kinadharia. 'If + past simple, would + infinitive'.

Sauti ya utendaji kwa ajili ya sauti ya kitaaluma

It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.

Uandishi wa kitaaluma unapendelea matumizi ya sauti ya upatanishi. 'It is + past participle + that' inasikika kuwa na mamlaka.

Kifungu cha uhusiano

Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.

Vifungu vya uhusiano huongeza maelezo bila kuanza sentensi mpya. Tumia 'who' kwa watu, 'which' kwa vitu.

Kifungu cha nomino kwa msongamano

The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.

Weka taarifa katika virai nomino badala ya kutumia sentensi nyingi fupi. Hii itakusaidia kupata alama za juu katika Lexical Resource.

Step 6

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