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Opinionacademic·2024

In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Step 1

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When tackling this question, you must state a clear position in your introduction (e.g., predominantly positive, predominantly negative, or a nuanced view leaning one way) and consistently uphold it. To acknowledge the opposing viewpoint without undermining your stance, use concessionary phrases like 'While it is true that...' or 'Admittedly, there are some drawbacks to...' followed immediately by a strong counter-argument or a reassertion of your main position. This demonstrates a sophisticated understanding of the issue without sitting on the fence.

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Students could argue the negative impact by citing the rise of social isolation and mental health issues, particularly among younger demographics, despite increased digital connectivity; studies in countries like Japan have highlighted a phenomenon of 'hikikomori' (extreme social withdrawal) which can be exacerbated by a lack of real-world interaction. Conversely, a positive argument could focus on how online platforms enable unprecedented global collaboration and accessibility for individuals with disabilities or those in remote areas, allowing them to participate in work and social life that would otherwise be impossible. The rapid adoption of remote work globally post-2020 serves as a compelling real-world example of this positive shift.

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The most common mistake students make on this specific question is failing to take a decisive stance, instead presenting an equal number of pros and cons without a clear dominant opinion. This often results in an essay that merely describes the internet's features rather than critically evaluating whether living without face-to-face contact is a positive or negative *development*. To avoid this, ensure your thesis statement clearly indicates your overall judgment and that each body paragraph contributes to supporting that judgment, even if acknowledging counter-arguments.

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For an opinion essay like this, a strong linking strategy involves using transition words that guide the reader through your argument, from concession to assertion. Start a paragraph acknowledging the other side with phrases like 'Notwithstanding the convenience offered by virtual interactions...' or 'While some might contend that...' Then, pivot to your main argument using 'However, a more critical examination reveals...' or 'Nevertheless, the profound implications for social cohesion cannot be overlooked.' Conclude by reiterating your main stance with phrases such as 'Ultimately, the evidence overwhelmingly suggests that...'

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Examiners look for a nuanced, well-developed argument that goes beyond a simple list of pros and cons. A band 8-9 answer will demonstrate critical thinking by exploring the *implications* of reduced face-to-face contact on human psychology, societal structures, and community bonds, rather than just describing online activities. It will use precise academic vocabulary to discuss concepts like 'social capital,' 'digital alienation,' or 'enhanced accessibility,' and present a clear, consistent, and well-supported opinion throughout the essay, showcasing sophisticated control over complex ideas and language.

Step 2

推奨エッセイ構成(Band 7+ スタンダード)

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イントロダクション

採点官の興味を引き、すぐに自分の立場を明確に示しましょう。

  • 強力な類義語を使って質問を言い換える — 言葉をそのままコピーしない
  • 最終文で自分の意見を明確に述べる — 疑いの余地を残さない
  • 簡潔に:最大2〜3文。すべての単語に意味を持たせる。

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

It is often argued that...There is a growing debate about whether...In my view, ... because ...
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ボディパラグラフ1 — 最強の論点

反論の余地のない証拠で、最も説得力のある主張を行う。

  • 力強いトピックセンテンスで始める — 自分の主張を大胆に述べる
  • 具体的な証拠(統計、実例、専門家の研究)で裏付ける
  • 証拠がどのように自分の主張を証明するのかを正確に説明する — 採点官に筋道を示す

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

The primary reason I hold this view is that...This is clearly illustrated by...For instance, in many countries...
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ボディパラグラフ2 — 補足的な論点

補完的な視点で自分の立場を強化する。

  • 異なる角度を選ぶ — パラグラフ1が経済的なら、社会的、環境的、倫理的視点を試す
  • 新しい証拠を使う — 同じ例や論理を繰り返さない
  • 自分の主張に明示的に結びつける — これが全体の立場をどのように強化するかを示す

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

Furthermore, it is worth considering that...Another compelling argument is that...This is further supported by the fact that...
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結論

自信に満ちた印象的な結びで、長く記憶に残る印象を与える。

  • 新しいアイデアを導入しない — これは最終的な要約である
  • イントロダクションよりも強い語彙を使って自分の立場を再提示する
  • 力強く:最大2文。権威を持って締めくくる。

各パラグラフのBand 7+ センテンススターター

In conclusion, I firmly believe that...To sum up, the evidence clearly suggests that...

Step 3

高得点につながる語彙・コロケーション

digital connectivityThe state of being connected to the internet and digital networks.
social isolationA state of complete or near-complete lack of contact between an individual and society.
virtual interactionCommunication and engagement that occurs through digital platforms rather than in person.
it is widely acknowledged thatA common academic phrase used to introduce a generally accepted fact or belief.
a compelling argument can be madeAn academic phrase used to introduce a strong and persuasive point.
this notion is predicated onAn academic phrase meaning that an idea or concept is based on a particular assumption or principle.
from my perspectiveA phrase used to introduce one's personal opinion or viewpoint.
the evidence overwhelmingly suggestsA strong phrase used to indicate that there is a great deal of support for a particular conclusion.
notwithstanding thisA linking phrase meaning 'despite this' or 'nevertheless', used to introduce a contrasting point.
it could be argued thatA hedging phrase used to introduce a possible argument or viewpoint, often to acknowledge an opposing side.

Step 4

Academic Phrases for This Essay Type

It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignore

追加

MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is more

対比

HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConversely

原因 / 結果

ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads to

例示

For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch as

譲歩

AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedly

Step 5

Grammar Patterns for Band 7+

譲歩を含む複文

Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.

高度な文法コントロールを示します。「Although/While」+ 反対の見解で始め、自分の立場を述べる — ニュアンスのある思考を示します。

条件法(タイプ2)

If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.

仮想的なシナリオや解決策に最適です。構造:「If + 過去形, would + 不定詞」 — 柔軟性と想像力を示します。

academicのための受動態

It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.

Academic writingは受動構文を好みます。「It is + 過去分詞 + that」は権威的で客観的なトーンを作ります。

関係節

Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.

複雑さを増さずに洗練さを加えます。「who」は人、「which」は物、「that」はどちらにも使います。

密度のための名詞句

The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.

より多くの情報を少ない言葉に詰め込みます。「効果的な政策の実施」対「政策は効果的に実施される」 — Lexical Resourceスコアを向上させます。

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