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Opinionacademic·2024

In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is this a positive or negative development?

कम्तिमा २५० शब्द लेख्नुहोस्। तपाईंले यो कार्यमा लगभग ४० मिनेट बिताउनु पर्छ।

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Step 1

यस विषयको लागि परीक्षक सुझावहरू

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When tackling this question, you must state a clear position in your introduction (e.g., predominantly positive, predominantly negative, or a nuanced view leaning one way) and consistently uphold it. To acknowledge the opposing viewpoint without undermining your stance, use concessionary phrases like 'While it is true that...' or 'Admittedly, there are some drawbacks to...' followed immediately by a strong counter-argument or a reassertion of your main position. This demonstrates a sophisticated understanding of the issue without sitting on the fence.

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Students could argue the negative impact by citing the rise of social isolation and mental health issues, particularly among younger demographics, despite increased digital connectivity; studies in countries like Japan have highlighted a phenomenon of 'hikikomori' (extreme social withdrawal) which can be exacerbated by a lack of real-world interaction. Conversely, a positive argument could focus on how online platforms enable unprecedented global collaboration and accessibility for individuals with disabilities or those in remote areas, allowing them to participate in work and social life that would otherwise be impossible. The rapid adoption of remote work globally post-2020 serves as a compelling real-world example of this positive shift.

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The most common mistake students make on this specific question is failing to take a decisive stance, instead presenting an equal number of pros and cons without a clear dominant opinion. This often results in an essay that merely describes the internet's features rather than critically evaluating whether living without face-to-face contact is a positive or negative *development*. To avoid this, ensure your thesis statement clearly indicates your overall judgment and that each body paragraph contributes to supporting that judgment, even if acknowledging counter-arguments.

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For an opinion essay like this, a strong linking strategy involves using transition words that guide the reader through your argument, from concession to assertion. Start a paragraph acknowledging the other side with phrases like 'Notwithstanding the convenience offered by virtual interactions...' or 'While some might contend that...' Then, pivot to your main argument using 'However, a more critical examination reveals...' or 'Nevertheless, the profound implications for social cohesion cannot be overlooked.' Conclude by reiterating your main stance with phrases such as 'Ultimately, the evidence overwhelmingly suggests that...'

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Examiners look for a nuanced, well-developed argument that goes beyond a simple list of pros and cons. A band 8-9 answer will demonstrate critical thinking by exploring the *implications* of reduced face-to-face contact on human psychology, societal structures, and community bonds, rather than just describing online activities. It will use precise academic vocabulary to discuss concepts like 'social capital,' 'digital alienation,' or 'enhanced accessibility,' and present a clear, consistent, and well-supported opinion throughout the essay, showcasing sophisticated control over complex ideas and language.

Step 2

सिफारिस गरिएको अनुच्छेद संरचना

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परिचय

प्रश्नलाई पुन: लेख्नुहोस् र तपाईंको स्थिति स्पष्ट रूपमा बताउनुहोस्।

  • प्रश्नलाई शब्दशः कहिल्यै नक्कल नगर्नुहोस् — पर्यायवाची शब्दहरू प्रयोग गरेर पुन: लेख्नुहोस्
  • परिचयको अन्तिम वाक्यमा आफ्नो राय व्यक्त गर्नुहोस्।
  • यसलाई अधिकतम २-३ वाक्यमा राख्नुहोस्।

सुरुवाती वाक्यांशहरू

It is often argued that...There is a growing debate about whether...In my view, ... because ...
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मुख्य अनुच्छेद १ — मुख्य तर्क

एक विशिष्ट उदाहरण सहित आफ्नो सबैभन्दा बलियो तर्क प्रस्तुत गर्नुहोस्।

  • तर्क प्रस्तुत गर्ने स्पष्ट विषय वाक्यबाट सुरु गर्नुहोस्।
  • कुनै खास उदाहरण, तथ्याङ्क, वा वास्तविक-विश्वको घटनाद्वारा समर्थन गर्नुहोस्।
  • यो उदाहरणले तपाईंको कुरालाई किन समर्थन गर्छ व्याख्या गर्नुहोस्।

सुरुवाती वाक्यांशहरू

The primary reason I hold this view is that...This is clearly illustrated by...For instance, in many countries...
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मुख्य अनुच्छेद २ — समर्थन तर्क

तपाईंको स्थितिलाई फरक कोणबाट बलियो बनाउने दोस्रो तर्क थप्नुहोस्।

  • एउटा फरक कोण छनौट गर्नुहोस् — यदि अनुच्छेद १ आर्थिक थियो भने, सामाजिक वा वातावरणीय प्रयास गर्नुहोस्।
  • विभिन्न प्रकारका प्रमाणहरू (व्यक्तिगत अवलोकन, अनुसन्धान, तर्क) प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्।
  • तपाईंको थेसिसमा फर्कनुहोस्

सुरुवाती वाक्यांशहरू

Furthermore, it is worth considering that...Another compelling argument is that...This is further supported by the fact that...
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निष्कर्ष

तपाईंको रायलाई पुनः बताउनुहोस् र तपाईंको मुख्य तर्कहरूलाई सङ्क्षेपीकरण गर्नुहोस्।

  • निष्कर्षमा नयाँ विचारहरू नल्याउनुहोस्।
  • परिचयमा प्रयोग गरिएका शब्दहरूभन्दा फरक शब्दहरू प्रयोग गरेर आफ्नो स्थिति पुन: बताउनुहोस्।
  • यसलाई २ वाक्यमा राख्नुहोस्।

सुरुवाती वाक्यांशहरू

In conclusion, I firmly believe that...To sum up, the evidence clearly suggests that...

Step 3

मुख्य शब्दावली

digital connectivityThe state of being connected to the internet and digital networks.
social isolationA state of complete or near-complete lack of contact between an individual and society.
virtual interactionCommunication and engagement that occurs through digital platforms rather than in person.
it is widely acknowledged thatA common academic phrase used to introduce a generally accepted fact or belief.
a compelling argument can be madeAn academic phrase used to introduce a strong and persuasive point.
this notion is predicated onAn academic phrase meaning that an idea or concept is based on a particular assumption or principle.
from my perspectiveA phrase used to introduce one's personal opinion or viewpoint.
the evidence overwhelmingly suggestsA strong phrase used to indicate that there is a great deal of support for a particular conclusion.
notwithstanding thisA linking phrase meaning 'despite this' or 'nevertheless', used to introduce a contrasting point.
it could be argued thatA hedging phrase used to introduce a possible argument or viewpoint, often to acknowledge an opposing side.

Step 4

Academic Phrases for This Essay Type

It is widely acknowledged thatThere is compelling evidence to suggestThis phenomenon can be attributed toA growing body of research indicatesThe implications of this are far-reachingThis raises important questions aboutFrom a broader perspectiveIt would be short-sighted to ignore

थप

MoreoverFurthermoreIn additionWhat is more

विपरीत

HoweverNeverthelessOn the other handConversely

कारण / प्रभाव

ConsequentlyAs a resultThereforeThis leads to

उदाहरण

For instanceTo illustrateA case in point isSuch as

छुट

AlthoughWhile it is true thatDespiteAdmittedly

Step 5

Grammar Patterns for Band 7+

सहुलियत सहितको जटिल वाक्य

Although some argue that technology isolates people, the evidence suggests it strengthens connections.

तपाईंले अधीनस्थ खण्डहरूलाई कसरी सम्हाल्न सक्नुहुन्छ भनी परीक्षकलाई देखाउँछ। 'Although/While' + विपरीत दृष्टिकोणबाट सुरु गर्नुहोस्, त्यसपछि आफ्नो दृष्टिकोण बताउनुहोस्।

सशर्त (प्रकार २)

If governments invested more in public transport, traffic congestion would decrease significantly.

काल्पनिक तर्क र समाधानहरूको लागि उत्तम। 'If + past simple, would + infinitive'।

शैक्षिक स्वरका लागि निष्क्रिय

It is often argued that education should be free. However, this view overlooks the practical challenges.

शैक्षिक लेखनमा निष्क्रिय संरचनाहरूलाई प्राथमिकता दिइन्छ। 'It is + past participle + that' ले आधिकारिकता झल्काउँछ।

सापेक्ष खण्ड

Students who study abroad, which is becoming increasingly common, tend to develop greater independence.

सापेक्ष खण्डहरूले नयाँ वाक्य सुरु नगरी विवरणहरू थप्छन्। मानिसहरूका लागि 'who', वस्तुहरूका लागि 'which' प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्।

घनत्वको लागि संज्ञा वाक्यांश

The rapid expansion of urban areas has led to increased pollution levels.

धेरै छोटो वाक्यहरू प्रयोग गर्नुको सट्टा संज्ञा वाक्यांशहरूमा जानकारी प्याक गर्नुहोस्। यसले तपाईंको Lexical Resource स्कोर बढाउँछ।

Step 6

मोडेल उत्तर

यस विषयको लागि पूर्ण मोडेल उत्तर पढ्न नि:शुल्क साइन अप गर्नुहोस्।

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